The girl is beautiful, but imho, you've ruined the picture with the photoshopping of the eyebrows. It's just too much. You can see that it's drawn on, and I guess that wasn't the point?
Well yeah, of course. I'm not saying she had blond eyebrows from before and then he drew black ones on them. They could've been heavy black with make-up first. But I'll be damned if that isn't photoshopped on top later as well, heavily.